Rough Cut 2

the second rough cut i believe is a great deal better that our original rough cut , i believe that this was due to our group having more time to edit hence why we have got 1:40 of footage compared to the 30 seconds of footage from our first cut , also in the second cut we managed to include many more of the 'Jane' shots which is the narrative part of our video , however i believe that some of the shots are quite lengthy, however some of the transitions were done really well but they could be edited to make them more smooth.